Action! Superb effort! Some spelling errors like Morgan needs to have's for prev chapters. "Lose consciousness." loose is referring to a dress or attire.

awesome!Update soon!

this is awesome, please update soon!

I really like this story, but you haven't added to it in a while, I hope you finish writing it

I'm annoying ne?
:P
I have no advice yet, only that you should /definitly/ continue.
*pokes charlie*
write!
Owh and the fic has great potential, it's interesting, really
thank you _
-Ninke
*ads black socks to faves* ;p

don't let events happen too quickly, drap it out a little, it makes the story more interesting.

Those cliffhangers are a little annoying, but I like your writing style and look forward to reading the next chapter.

O look, another vampire story. How original.

I think that u'r story is very casual in a good way. U have lots of writing skils.
P.S: make sure that u spell things correctly