Reviews for Watch Me Mummy
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
although it was a good poem, children are children and shouldn't be stopped from doing things just because they can be dangerous. should we stop crossing roads?
XfallingleafX chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
I can't see any problems with it. Its great. My fave line/paragraph would have to be:
Watch me sink,
Watch the bubbles,
Watch my eyes,
No more cuddles.
So sad.
Keep it up!