Reviews for Manhattan
Ame Lockheart chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
aw... sad...
E. Michelle Logan chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
You have an interesting effect going on here - the language is very casual yet the message is painfully poignant. Well done.
Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Not a happy ending. It sounds like it hurt.
AgentUnderscore chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
If I didn't know better, I'd SWEAR it was in RAP format, but I'll forgive that due to its depth and controversy. It was a wonderful piece and, without too many words, effective emotes on a personal level.
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
That is so sad. Was this a true story? This was emotionally riveting. Great job.
Brooke.D chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
very upsetting yet very emotional! i liked it...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
wow... confusing, but sweet i like it alot
kalariah chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
That's incredibly sad. The emotion just screams out of this poem; you've portrayed the shock and horror all of America felt on that day. The last line is especially moving: "I waited in Boston; she never left Manhattan."
chocolatecreme06 chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
Crazy Arms chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
This is sad. I like it however.