Reviews for Manhattan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw... sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have an interesting effect going on here - the language is very casual yet the message is painfully poignant. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a happy ending. It sounds like it hurt. |
![]() ![]() If I didn't know better, I'd SWEAR it was in RAP format, but I'll forgive that due to its depth and controversy. It was a wonderful piece and, without too many words, effective emotes on a personal level. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so sad. Was this a true story? This was emotionally riveting. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very upsetting yet very emotional! i liked it... |
![]() ![]() wow... confusing, but sweet i like it alot |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's incredibly sad. The emotion just screams out of this poem; you've portrayed the shock and horror all of America felt on that day. The last line is especially moving: "I waited in Boston; she never left Manhattan." |
![]() ![]() ![]() sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sad. I like it however. |