Reviews for Night and Day
Keren chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
I like the fact that it's very realistic and that it isn't so clear, and that there is room for pple to interpret this piece in different ways.
Love The Gullable Gelbart
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Oh my goodness, I luv all your poems, they lift me up, so positive and optimistic! I luv the repetition of: "It's black but it's white, It's dark but it's bright, Like night and day, Like night and day" Very nicely done! Yet another one going on my favorites...
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Interesting transition from "night" to "day." I especially like the description of smiles as "black but white, like day and like night." That is an interesting and thought-provoking description. I also like the repetition of "any" in the first two lines, and the repetition of the chorus of black and white and day and night. This poem is thought-provoking, but it could be a little more clear in what is black and what is white, and in giving examples. Good job, though. And thank you for adding me to your favorites! : )
Random Tokin' White Dude chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
This is headed straight to my .Oh, and thank you for reviewing my stuff,it always makes me happy to see my inbox filled with messages from "
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
I like the repetition. It goes well with the poem If you think about it. Night and day..then night and day again...over and over. It is a cycle so..the repetition kind of mirrors the words.
Tempest Epilogue chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
I love it. It does quite sound like a song, especially with all the repetition. Anyway, it's a brilliant poem, methinks!
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Yes yes I know I know...I've reviewed this b4 but...every time I read this poem I want to say it again and again:
I can't STAND it! Each time I read it I cry and then I sit for half an hour just thinking about it...
So good...SO good...
~to read or not to read?~
strongwind chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
i love the contrasts.
keep writing (i'm sure you will without my telling you...).
anyway- i liked this!
Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Dude, I read this on Sunday and got kicked off before I could type a proper review. People these days. *sniff*
This is totally a song, man. The first time I read it I heard this tune going through my head and now I'm K's Choice-d because I was just listening to one of their songs and this song just sounded like a rock song suddenly.
Don't mind if I tweak with it, do ya?
Oh yeah. This is a review. I'm supposed to REVIEW the POEM. Okay. I can do this.
I LOVED it! It's exactly your philosophy. Reminds me of "The Sound of My Own Footsteps"- that favorite line of mine. But everything reminds me of that line...
Dudette you so totally rock.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
You must be hanging around D and me too much...
You poor thing, you've been cursed by it too!
Lookn Abi, quit while you're ahead! Don't let it take control! NO!
One word for ya darlin'. I'll give you a hint: It starts with an A, ends with a G, and has a M, A, Z, an I and an N somewhere in it.
Another hint is it's goin' in my favorites!