Reviews for Love
simpleplan13 chapter 25 . 1/20/2008
I love the stanza about not living, but existing without getting hurt... the whole ice imagery is awesome.. and I love how you dont mention its your heart until the end.
simpleplan13 chapter 24 . 11/17/2007
I like this.. its a great metaphor.. most of us have gone too slow and too fast and I like how the ending is hopeful.. kinda goldilocks.. too fast, too slow, just right lol
simpleplan13 chapter 23 . 11/13/2007
oo I LOVE that ending.. the repetition of little boy was nice too
Fan Fan chapter 9 . 11/9/2007
Geez...as I read this, I feel like reading the thoughts of the one a few of my poems were meant for...guilt, is the ingredient, misunderstanding, is the icing. However, I had to smile at the "Blink once" and "Blink twice" catch phrases :) lovely. I'll have to read the rest of the poems at a later time as I take a break for now. Keep up the good work
Fan Fan chapter 8 . 11/9/2007
What a contrast of perspective from the last poem -_

Well done exchange of character, too bad it's just mis-interpreted as a game of flirtation :)
Fan Fan chapter 7 . 11/9/2007
The anger ruined the flow :( However, I did enjoy the out of this world descriptions like the china doll covered in barbed wire and holds a machete hahaha good one
Fan Fan chapter 6 . 11/9/2007
hahaha on first look I thought you were describing a guy like me :P Then when it comes to a closer look argh I'm no teddy bear! Still, thank you for the smile :)
Fan Fan chapter 5 . 11/9/2007
Oh the road doesn't have to be long and hard if you got a silver balloon to fly by ;) ...I couldn't help but stare mouth agape at the second half of the poem. Do I wish I never come to be in that position...but then, maybe I should always have raw roses prepared just to put that knife to use to rid the thorns that lays before the beautiful petals :) I do recognize that this poem is one of the few that very well portrays the expression of the many who have been frustrated by the veil of ignorance to see the 'one' behind them standing in their own shadow. I applaud your courage in those words so bluntly made from heart.
Fan Fan chapter 4 . 11/9/2007
Wow, the last two words completely added the color to this rhyme! I've never seen so few words(2!) used to effectively! Twisted turn, well done :)
Fan Fan chapter 3 . 11/9/2007
A strange unique rhyming of its own. Uniquely beautiful. This is an exotic one... :)
Fan Fan chapter 2 . 11/9/2007
Very insightful poem :) I was grinning reading how you compared his ego to whine of a mosquito hahaha thank you for the lovely work
simpleplan13 chapter 22 . 3/9/2007
daisy are my favorite flower.. lol...

I like the metaphor about the rose especially and the part about the lawnmower was great
simpleplan13 chapter 21 . 2/3/2007
I really like this.. its an interesting idea making something bad sound so good... and the imagery is beautiful
simpleplan13 chapter 20 . 1/3/2007
I like this.. the repition is nice and hte ending is very bittersweet... one thing i dont agree with is the second to last stanza... i think a good friend can tell you that, but thats just my opnion
simpleplan13 chapter 19 . 5/26/2006
aw very sweet.. I like the repition.. well done
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