Reviews for The Sound of Your Heart Beat
Getuie chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
This is absolutely amazing... I feel like it's almost written as God's words for me. I have recently written a Xanga entry in which I pose the question "with what eyes do God look at me?"

Incredibly Beautiful piece.
HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
This is so beautiful. I love this piece, How it's written for every single one of God's children , His special message to all of us!. You are so talented. Keep writing for God , Bless ya!
Edraith chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
Lovely. This beautifully depicts the Father’s heart of love towards us. There’s some relaxing, healing quality in this poem to restore the discouraged and hurting.
P.H. Wise chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
This is a beautiful poem. I love the image of the river filled with golden leaves. It's an image filled with more riches than any man ever found panning for gold in the rivers of California. :)
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
Try to not start lines with and, simply delete the word for the entire poem to sound better.