|Reviews for Resigned|
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
just like some of my poems... no idea why i write em! great job, i like the sort of free verse thing going on. Keep up the good work.
~Never the same~
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
A intriguing cacophony of emotions and thoughts.
Very well concieved
| Shadafakup chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
(Sorry this can't be a login, my browser's giving me problems again)
Random thought you said?
Its good, really.
Loved the sound of this piece, sounds melancholic, and like the title says, resigned.
Ah, the subject matter was lovely. I really enjoyed reading it through.
Questions presented in the piece was lovely, although I thought "Has my will finally died" should not end with a comma but a fullstop.
However, I LOVED that one word stanza, with the rhetorical question at the end.
Awesome job here, its a lovely short piece.
| Deadwind chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Though it does come across as 'random' I understand what you're saying. Great job!
| Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
This comes across as a philosophical search for the meaning of your soul. However, some things are a little confusing for me. whose 'will' are you talking about in the line:
to quell their will.
Are the ashes of fire your death, or the spark of life within each pearson?
Don't take this as a bad review. I see a lot of potential in this piece, but I think you need to clarify what you are trying to articulate, but also strive to do so in a visual way as well.