Reviews for Crimson Tears of Pain
shattered moonbeams chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
I am a huge fan of alot of your poems. If you could review my own, I'd really appreciate your advice. DONT STOP WRITING! Youre an inspiration to me and encourage me to stop holding in the pain & let it out on paper.
BleedTrueBeauty chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
the end really hits you. like all your work this is great. i really love the second to last line. that ones really great. keep up your great work!
coldslit chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
its pretty good
i liked the bit where you said
'The knife killing the innocent
The monster breaking through the skin'
that bit was quite well put
(ps- i want more of kaitlyn and the letter)
arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
I like the idea that you are using, and you incorporate a lot of strong thoughts into it. Some poetry just makes you wonder, and yours is one such. Keep up the good work!