Reviews for The Payback
Chaloux chapter 4 . 4/4/2004
Ah, yes. We all dream of that glorious day when we can take revenge. You captured the essence perfectly. Sweet story.
Summerkins chapter 4 . 2/11/2004
Wow...this is a good story...i get teased alot at school too...but i dont live in projects and stuff...i'm just different and the people at my school are least most of the time...i really wish it was possible for this sort of theing to REALLY happen...
FAKEromances chapter 4 . 1/16/2004
aww...that was sad, and really well-written...but beautiful. i was hoping for more friendship between them at the end, but the way you finished it was great to.
wonderful job! :)
CaffineAnonymous chapter 4 . 1/13/2004
Hey I think you've captured the sickening social castes of today's school system. And I wish that every problem could be treated this simply... good job.
The Unbreakable chapter 4 . 1/13/2004
That is, without a doubt, one of the best stories I read here ever since joining the site. The way you weaved the web there was excellent and your style of explaining things is kind of like my own. The characters were well developed, even the smallest, and the moral is a great one, showing that you shouldn't bully other people around. I really honestly enjoyed this and please write more soon.
Guess chapter 4 . 1/13/2004
WOW. You are so talented. I mean this from the bottom of my heart. I am proud to know you. You are going to be amazing! I love the character name selection. Im glad when the character roles changed, the names remained - it allowed me to keep track. I wanna read more early chapters on Katherine's life. Other examples of how hard it is to be a Beecher. Another love to read.. I'd love to read more events that happened the day Allison was 'charmed'.
PiNk DUck FrauD chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
I like this. The characters seem possibly a little exaggarated but Katherine reminds me for some strange way of myself...her whole persona with the not crying/being 'tortured' deal hits home for my ninth grade year.
I'm wondering where this will go and also about the Andrew you update it soon and good luck.
randomfanwriter chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
*claps hands*
That was GOOD!
Keep going UPDATE SOON!
sleep all night rock all day chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
hi there! cool. update soon