Reviews for the real me
Phaedrus chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
I can relate to this poem in so many ways, excellent content.
Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I loved this one. A warning to all parents huh? Very good. Though I must say some of the other parts of it made me feel sorry for the boy in there. Some experiences should never be lived. I know.
Mikalah D chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
alrighty then...i realy like this one like i've said before the rhyming is awesome and almost perfect in my like to hear you read this one of these days. :)
Anglachel67 chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Wow. Wow. Wow. That was stunning. It really moved me, and made me think. Good poetry can do that to you.
Archer In The Shadows chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Wow... this is amazing. I love your expression of emotion...
xzerinieah chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
I could relate to some of the topics...This stuff is pretty emotional. Deep in some parts.
Feiery chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
Oh...See? I'm reviewing! lol. It's very...intense. *nods* Likin' it! Very personal and deep, very honest too. Keep it up!
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
That was very deep, and I liked it so much. You've done an amazing job. ttfn
Clouded-Skye chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Wow I like this one! Thnx 4 correcting me on My "Clouded Skies"
ConfuseDAngel chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
hiya, thanks for reviewing mine, well since this was the poem on top, I'll review this first and as I was expecting it was a quite emotional poem, the rhythm and flow sounded right and looks like you placed your heart into doing this one. The poem speaks not only one but occupies a certain percentage of us all, this is a sad reality we have yet to fully understand. anywayz...nice one..peaceout
this is not a biography chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
You should break this poem up more in order for it to seem not as mushed together. It's good, and I love the subject, but its too crammed.
noplace4me4469 chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
ya thats really great i know what it's like to be restricted..nice job
Frg0t73n 1nn0cnc3 chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Hey man, Love the poem. Some of the things that you stated are what I can sometimes relate to. Keep up the good work.
Frg0t73n 1nn0cnc3
sweetadeline chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
"But it's only fueled my hunger to live life rather than suicide
And that's a coward's way out; to cry, give up, and die"
This turned me off.
Aside from that, it was good. I read a few others, but didn't comment.
Identity chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
you expressed urself very well. good piece.
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