Reviews for I win!
Angellostinthedarknesstoo lazy to log in lol chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
this is beautiful Mia, absolutely wonderful. I love it. it's just wow, Beautiful. I love the irony of the whole situation. Excellent work. I can relate so well and I love this so.
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
lol! wow, vent session indeed chica.
good work, twas very intriguing :).
i especially loved the last stanza...
"So go fuck yourself to hell and bitch with the devil you sod" purely because, throughout the whole poem im kinda going *ooh, what an utter cow* and then its kinda like...oh know it was when someone scratches you on the back in THE perfect place *sigh* ...ehem... moving right along...
im sorry i didnt see these poems earlier, i tend to be blind, i only saw that *blue eyes* was updated.
*onwards with the many reviews i hvae to do!*
P:S - LOL, funny, its always nice to have a little hope chica, dont beat yourself up about it...beliving in fate can be inspiring. its hope which normally keeps me goin...and coffee
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
i like it and the ending except one stanza...
Go kill yourself then, I cannot pretend I care anymore,
I hate you, and I laugh at your face, for you are such a fool,
Don't you see? If I don't kill you, you'll never die, for
Hell will spit you out, and heaven for you would be way too cool.
because it just seems so cruel it makes you not like the writer so much... or for me anyway.. still a great poem with a good message
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Oh wow... this is so angry! It's obviously very personal, but you managed to make the story come out anyhow through the poem... very cool. I LOVE this line: "That you should steal my angels, and find the devil." So cool... such a creative line. good job!