this story is awesome... you must post more soon.

*purrs* you need to write more because this is good. Please please please... please write more.

loving the story!can't wait till the next chappie comes hope its soon too!

AGH! How could you stop at such a bloody time? That was such a great story! I'm disgusted by incest, but hey, you made me want read it. It was good despite the incest stuff. This is an awesome story, UPDATE!

I'm now well and thoroughly hooked on this story! it's so good! I love the style of the writing and the way everything flows well together. You have very few mistakes and it's over all an excellent read.

kinkeh

I like it... except for the names... I mean, can you really hear urself moaning Lyon? cuz that just seems weird to me... shrugs

but other than my weird thing about the names- I love it

yet another success guys!

PLEASE! UPDATE!

I LOVE THIS STORY. Plz plz plz plz, i'm begging you. Update soon! I really wanna know what happens.

AH! Please pick this story up again! I love it! It's very good writing and I want to see what happens! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE start writing it again! -Sarah

*dies* The commentary by Rave and Cerin was great. I mean, the story itself is very nice too... But I think I'm just having Androgynously Poetic withdrawals. *sniffles*

I love Androgynously Poetic, but also hope you will be able to complete this story. Thank you.

. And...uhh...your chapters are so freaking short. Gr. I love the story,thoguh. S'cute.

I quite like this story, I really wish you'd update, doesn't look like you have in a while

Why haven't you written more of this wonderfully amazing story? This story rocks and I must have more!

I like this so far. It's a change from the usual 'twincest' where both twins secretly like eachother right off the bat. At least Lijah hasn't realised it yet. I'm curious as to why this wasn't continued.