Reviews for With Butterflies and Hurricanes
Seeker of Knowledge chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
this is a really interesting story.

are you ever going to continue it or was it just a singular idea?

never stop writing

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ola chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
hee hee. lol. great start! please write more soon! )
pixy-dizzy chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
*cackles* This is funny! It sounds like it could really really go somewhere, and I am BEGGING you to continue!
...please? *puppy-dog eyes* tee-hee! .
NicoleniTashi chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Your story reminds me of the story Aladdin. I like the main character. Please write more.
Raz Nic an t-Saoir chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Well, where to begin with so much promising stuff to talk about? The lead character's witty narration is both funny and charming, quickly causing her to endear herself to the readers. No mean feat, as cocky thieves can come off as irritating and have done in quite a lot of fiction. Intriguing continual mentioning of curses, funny how most of her little gang have them ...
The action was well paced and nicely written, always allowing the reader to be sure of what was going on without slowing down the proceedings with lots of superfluous description. Again, that keeps the style in keeping with a first person narrative, a thief constantly on the run isn't going to have much time or inclination to think of long-winded poetic descriptions when there's goodies to nick.
And the dragon was adorable.
P.S. Write what you know, huh? That main character is so blatantly you, I'm keeping a close eye on my books next time I invite you over.