Reviews for When it rains |
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Mr. Singh is back chapter 1 . 9/24/2005 A naturalist, indeed. I'm not sure if you were trying to make a point or not, but its poetry, and it doesn't always need a point. Other than that, very interesting symbolism and brilliant imagery. "waterfall of crystal beads" Great piece |
CutToHeal chapter 1 . 2/21/2005 Seems a little simple, and not too much it was still intriguing (sp) and it grasped me. Well done. |
The Eyes of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/14/2004 Heyya! Thanks for reviewin my What is a friend poem! I really liked this one. I love the rain! It shows explicit detail, and that's good lol. Anyway, Great Job! Keep writing! -Lindsey- |
Kitai Matsuru chapter 1 . 3/5/2004 Another good poem. it can picture all of it. It has such a nice flow to it, and flow is important. A beautiful poem, in my opinion. |
DrenchedDrumTech chapter 1 . 2/14/2004 nice one Kei-chan. ~DDT |
James Rain chapter 1 . 2/12/2004 A like this poem a lot, it is very beautiful and full of inspiration. I especially like the last five lines. Very nice comment. |
Soviet chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 Cute poem, good visualization, but no point to it, it has no deeper meaning, whatever, good job, well done |
A.R. Jovine chapter 1 . 1/30/2004 Its a great little poem. I like it, I really don't like ryhming(sp) poems that much and thus this poem seems so orignal and fresh to see it other than the usual blah ryhmes with blah. Good job! |
narmerguy chapter 1 . 1/16/2004 Haha, nice poetry... but I have to go to the bathroom now. |