Reviews for When it rains
Mr. Singh is back chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
A naturalist, indeed.

I'm not sure if you were trying to make a point or not, but its poetry, and it doesn't always need a point.

Other than that, very interesting symbolism and brilliant imagery. "waterfall of crystal beads"

Great piece
CutToHeal chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Seems a little simple, and not too much it was still intriguing (sp) and it grasped me. Well done.
The Eyes of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Heyya!
Thanks for reviewin my What is a friend poem! I really liked this one. I love the rain! It shows explicit detail, and that's good lol. Anyway, Great Job! Keep writing!
-Lindsey-
Kitai Matsuru chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Another good poem. it can picture all of it. It has such a nice flow to it, and flow is important. A beautiful poem, in my opinion.
DrenchedDrumTech chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
nice one Kei-chan.
~DDT
James Rain chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
A like this poem a lot, it is very beautiful and full of inspiration. I especially like the last five lines. Very nice comment.
Soviet chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Cute poem, good visualization, but no point to it, it has no deeper meaning, whatever, good job, well done
A.R. Jovine chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Its a great little poem. I like it, I really don't like ryhming(sp) poems that much and thus this poem seems so orignal and fresh to see it other than the usual blah ryhmes with blah. Good job!
narmerguy chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Haha, nice poetry... but I have to go to the bathroom now.