Reviews for Look in her eyes
Haven of the Shadows chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
hey, really great poem. people can just be so blind sometimes. I hope things turn out well for you in the end. blessed be, Angel_Assasin
krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 1/27/2004 of the best poems i ever read. i think i can relate, i'm a jw.
p.s. i understand and will be your friend _
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
This is a really good poem. it is really good. i hope its not you you. very good.
BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
I can relate to some this. My path is wiccan as well and i must supress my beleifs for my family looks upon it with disgust. It's terrible that they force me to try and beleive in what they do...your poem is beautiful. i loved it.
Aleonic Relic chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
a sad poem, a lot of questions in the poem but it's good. sad but a good poem.
Dusk-Keewadin chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
ooh that was such a cool poem I really cannot wait to read more from you.
wyldflowa chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
What a sad poem! :,(
Like all of your work I've read so far it has a beautiful flowing rythm and each line just seems to urge you on. The last line works well too. It's sort of a shock at the end and I feel really sorry for you. It's totally unfair to be ostricised (sp!) because your beliefs are a little different from most peoples.
Jezabelle Valo not signed in chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
Wow, I really love this poem...although it sounds familiar somehow. The questions in the middle are a bit much though, perhaps better spaced out a bit. Overall, it's amazing!
Keep writing,
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
Brilliant poem, but it was very sad. Good job.