Reviews for Pax Vobiscum
Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
This is lovely. I'm not sure why...I do like the rhythm of the last line and the general smilingness.
"tell those you feel for why you love them" is a little awkwardly worded, doesn't roll like the rest.
this has made my day happier - complete rehab from an essay and a sleep-deprived aimlessness. My thanks.
nefaria18 chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
again again again. wow. the last line gives it such power and your direct allusions, wonderful! ~nefaria
HatedBlade chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
wow, gud one, i like alot (yea, greatest reveiw ever)
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Very good poem, with positive messages that were refreshing to read, and that I agree with. "Do not be besieged by the day, but embrace it." I particularly liked that. Great work, keep writing :) And thanks for the review :)