Reviews for Untitled
me chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
uh hey!
Olivia chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
hey i liked it!
Jenn chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
OMIGOSh... this story is definately gonna be interesting.. *grin* i luved the beginning. personally, i think it's an awesome beginning! hehe at least its not mushy *wrinkles nose* (no offense or nothing i liked innocent love) keep it up and U BETTER UPDATE ME... or ELSE~ loljk but really,update me k?
Luvzlotz (ok screw the spelling mistakes...) ~ Jenn
Phuong chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
i like it so far... cant the cops track down cell phone? lol idk jus got that off a movie.. lol okai.. good story update soon!
Onion Ring chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
This is a nice start... Well it is written better than your other fiction but Ryan seems sketchy who would be like i wanna be your friend so randomly.. and for her... what provoked her to run this time out of all the times the parents pushed her around? Well still good anyways, continue.
SilentWriter89 chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Hey! This is good, nice start and its interesting. Definitely a good idea very smart patts! Keep updating and thanks for hurrying u procrastinator! So yeah hehe... Much luv!