Reviews for Untitled |
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![]() ![]() uh hey! |
![]() ![]() hey i liked it! |
![]() ![]() OMIGOSh... this story is definately gonna be interesting.. *grin* i luved the beginning. personally, i think it's an awesome beginning! hehe at least its not mushy *wrinkles nose* (no offense or nothing i liked innocent love) keep it up and U BETTER UPDATE ME... or ELSE~ loljk but really,update me k? Luvzlotz (ok screw the spelling mistakes...) ~ Jenn |
![]() ![]() i like it so far... cant the cops track down cell phone? lol idk jus got that off a movie.. lol okai.. good story update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nice start... Well it is written better than your other fiction but Ryan seems sketchy who would be like i wanna be your friend so randomly.. and for her... what provoked her to run this time out of all the times the parents pushed her around? Well still good anyways, continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! This is good, nice start and its interesting. Definitely a good idea very smart patts! Keep updating and thanks for hurrying u procrastinator! So yeah hehe... Much luv! |