Reviews for The Full Fondness Of My Heart
Caitir chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
*smiles* very nice. it isn't a typical romance poem... no silly trite sap at all. it's absolutely lovely, and the word choice is perfect. you convey emotion wonderfully. bravo!
Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
The descriptions and imagery in this is fantastic. A very dark romance is portrayed in this, in my mind. Great, great job, and keep it up.
~Lidless Eye
SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
Very, very cool. "If sleep did not lure me to rest, I would lie / Always awake and think of him as my love." I know the feeling... Awesome job...
PainKiller chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Ah, what a wonderful website this is when people can leave six line reviews. ;o)
But yeah, it helps for me to imagine this since I was there. And you described this perfectly! Nice, evocative language, though perhaps a little laconic. Other than that, very good. :o)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
interesting.. i love the first stanzza