|Reviews for Salt and Pepper|
| dudette chapter 4 . 5/24
I love this story
| Susan chapter 29 . 9/16/2011
That was a really enjoyable read.
thank you so much for it.
| ViaKane chapter 23 . 9/11/2010
| igot4 chapter 29 . 10/18/2009
Ok, so I know you like wrote this story years ago and I just recently found this website with all these amazing stories, I have to say yours was the most sweetest one I have ever read... I really hope you come up with a sequel to this story I also loved how you did it with both point of views. Keep up the good work hopefully I will be able to purchase one of your books in the near future. :)
| Crescent City Chick chapter 29 . 11/16/2008
I loved this. This story is so wonderful. This isn't just one of my favorite stories on fictionpress, this is now one of my favorite stories in general. Like ranking with Pride and Prejudice and what not. I want to print it out and bind it! Its so great. I can't believe you wrote this when you were so young! I loved the way you used Salt and Pepper. I got the meaning behind it! Wonderful. Just wonderful. Its so weird cuz I'm from New Orleans so the name Katrina is like..."BLAH!" to me. But as I started reading this, Katrina became Katrina Marshall, a character I feel that I REALLY relate to. Like VERY much. Its so crazy. It's like she and I are sisters. I LOVE to read. I cannot for the life of me play sports. Sometimes is seems like my parents just don't appreciate me for the things I'm good at and always stress the negative. I like a white guy... :) when I was in school, I was cool with some people but couldn't always call them friends. Its was like they were sometimes my friends but who else did I have to hang with so I tried to get along with them. I love this story so much. You super talented. I hope you go far with your writing skills!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 28 . 5/17/2008
That was really cool, the way you went through a year in their lives. I really liked this story and I might read it again sometime. But for now I'm going to the Authors Note and then I have to work on my on darn story lol. Anyways, great job and I'm out!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 26 . 5/17/2008
Chapter Twenty-Five(It was really cool the way he asked her to the dance. Guys are so dominant that way. They like to ask the girl out and they like to ask for their hand in marriage and they just like things like that. So we women humor them lol. Loved it)
Chapter Twenty-Six(Sadly I couldn't up with a name for this chapter either. But I loved it none the less. Most white guys can't dance lol. It's a sterotype but now a lot of white guys are shaking their groove thangs right along with the rest of us. It's awesome! Bye For Now!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 23 . 5/17/2008
WOW that chapter was really, really cool. And I really love the chapter name. It was great and I think they can make it. They're so worth it to each other so...yeah. Awesome.
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 22 . 5/17/2008
Ohkay, that was a bit weird. Why did she just leave? I thought she was more rational than that.
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 21 . 5/17/2008
FINALLY! It took them long enough to kiss. I had to read twenty-one chapters for this to happen lol. But it was worth it. Nicely done. Bye!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 20 . 5/17/2008
Wow, the chapters got short again O_o what's that all about lol. Anyways, I liked the last two chapters. Though I'm not so sure about how I feel about Brian being well...unable. Anyways though, I'm off. Bye!
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 18 . 5/17/2008
Chapter seventeen was pretty cool but umm is it like she doesn't believe in love or something? I don't know, I hardly read romance novels but I believe in all that stuff that romantic novelists write about. This day and age it's really rare but I still believe it's out there.
So chapter eighteen was cool but Brian's thoughts kind of jump around a bit and things just aren't always explained very well.
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 13 . 5/16/2008
Okay, so I was only supposed to be reviewing every two chapters but that was so cute. So, so cute. I loved what he said to her and how they're all running together and whatnot. So cute. I hate running, but if there was a cutie, I just might do it lol. Nice one.
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 12 . 5/16/2008
Well I really liked this, it had length to it. Finally! LoL. It was awesome but what was up with the formatting? Shouldn't their speech have been seperated? Like it was in the end rather then the beginning? I don't know, anyways, it was really good. Anyhow, I'll probably be posting this interracial story I started today by tomorrow or the next day. Check it out won't you?
| Lucid Lune in Acoustic chapter 10 . 5/16/2008
Well chapter 10 was super short but I can deal. I liked it and I hope he and Katrina get together soon.