I can't believe I didn't notice that you had updated until now. Well, this chappie is good, just like the last one.
The ending with you and SF was ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS! I don't think I can stress that enough. *giggles* So funny.
The beginning to this chappie was great. I love Nassirudden's sense of humor. It's great.
Keep up the good work.
CotA

LOL..YES...i get to send in another review...hee hee...anyways...come now Silver we must finish this tale...you can't just stop it at chappie 2? *pouts* that's just wrong..anyways..update...please *bats puppy eyes*

that was hella good...silver..but im so sad to hear about you *clears throat* sickness...I hope you feel better soon *gives flowers and a little stuff kitsune* hope you like...
oh by the way this is Tessa or nikki...it doesnt'matter...kyo is letting me post this story that im working on...under his name...so i hope ppl read it...its pretty kewl

*stares at the screen* "Something green"?
Okay then, cool chapter Silver Fox! Hope you update soon!
~SMV~

Lol to the A/N. Are there actually two people writing this, or are you just pretending to be two people?
Back to the review, or shall I say, to the review for the first time? Anyway, great chapter. I like this a lot.

Really neat story you got here. I'm gonna keep reading.

Actually, it's a good idea, Silver, so run with it... Teehee, get it? "Run" with it? Sorry, I know that was like, such corniness... .oo(Corniness... is that a word?) Well, keep it up, Silver! Can't wait to read the rest of it! Ja ne!
FGA (is NL on FF.N)

DN-C: oh...I hadn't read this one...
Sesshou: and?
DN-C: I think it will be cool!
Sesshou: so which one then?
DN-C: *grins* BOTH!
Sesshou: ...it can't be that way
DN-C: ...crap
Sesshou: indeed

*applaudes* It's very good Silver! I'd like to see more of it

I think you should keep going. I really like this story so far, even though the first chapter was short. Keep up the good work, becaues I really look forward to reading more.
CotA

Cool story! I've read a few your stories on and decided to check this out. So, Silver Fox wrote this one? Pretty cool! Please update soon!
~SMV~

Hey there Silverfox-chan..long time no talk...I see this is your first fic...too cool
well let me get to the review:
*clears throat*
That was very attention getting. I like the girls name thats what caught my eye. I also thought jap/egypt mixture is a first was too kewl also but then you thru that cyborg stuff in and I was like HUH? Im not into Sci-fi to much but this I have to say has my curosity peak and I want to see how this fic im sorry this story turns out..So lets continue chop chop _