Reviews for Too Late
Sadie Kate chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
It's never too late if you'll only call upon His Name.
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
I think you should go further with this poem and be more specific. Why is it too late? Why is your soul lost? Is this a person's thoughts after commiting a crime, getting a divorce, or tearing those labels off a mattress? You alone know the reason for these feelings evoked in your piece, but not anyone else. Bear them. Share them. Find something that will leap off the page and grip the reader - the consequences of losing your temper, words you've said that you can never take back, or other actions we've all regretted doing. Your poem still works as is, but I think there's greater potential here.
Greater potential.
Lowell
J-fReAK chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Masterpeices do not come from "poor attempts." This is good not matter how much your humble nature tells you it isn't.