Reviews for Ripples on the lake
00900 chapter 8 . 2/19/2004
Yeesh, feeling, Mingjun!
This is great Haiku, especially for a beginner! You are so good at capturing emotion. I wish I was that good at it.
00900 chapter 5 . 2/14/2004
Oh... my grampa is blind now, and he was so independant, it just kills him to not be able to tell who the grandkids are, not be able to help my grandma, not be able to drive.
It's just so hard for him... and for us. We always wonder...
00900 chapter 4 . 2/14/2004
*sniffles*
This makes me think of the dream I had last night...
About a guy...
00900 chapter 3 . 2/14/2004
Wow.
This is jaw-dropping.
I'm gonna put this on my fave-stories list.
00900 chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
hee hee hee
great verse... stanza.. chapter... whatever you call additions to poetry.
00900 chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
Wow, this is sad...
I have felt this way sometimes too.
You do a great job of putting it in writing.