Reviews for Till You Return
Grauer Drache chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
There is always an end... but there is equally a beginning. Now that this poem has ended- how will you begin again? When your skies have cleared and you have been turned- what will be revealed to you then? THIS is a good poem.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 2/26/2004
Beautiful. I can feel such longing in teh poem .. and I love the concept behind these to lines...
"The sands of time filter through,
We're due to be turned soon."
Very creative. Bravo!
A. Bush chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
that was very touching
just so happens you inspired me as far as a previous peom goes called colors
the poem i wrote is called Collage of the sea
check it out and thank you for the inspiration
Seraphim of the Dark Moon chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Very nicely executed. Very soft and pale feeling it gives. Don't worry about putting end...because if you think about it...there is never and end; and I know you know what I am talking about. Keep smiling kid, and keep writing. Blessings to you.
Keane chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Thats really good, someone has finally put down in words what i feel, amazing, love it really love it!