|Reviews for Invisible|
| far-away-dreamer chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
I like this one. Simple, yet deep. And there's some emotion that runs through my body when I read it, but I'm not quite sure what it is.
| The Zaniak chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Short, yet to the point. I liked this, because even though you only used...9 words, I understood exactly what you meant. Nice use of commas, too.