Reviews for What Am I?
Grace Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Lovely work. I like how the two last lines of each stanza contridicts itself. Again, very nice piece.
jdehn chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
wow, good piece of work. Liked the flow. ~no escape
E A Tetje chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
Wow I like this a lot. I like the way you phrase your thoughts and hold a semi loose rhyme scheme... its good
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
O_o Oh, Nice! With a capital "N." I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's got a lot of things going for it. Rhyme scheme works well and so does the poem's flow. Really nicely written and a great, creative piece here. Definitely going onto the old story favorites list. _ I really must find the time to look at more of your work. Feel free to stop by sometime and take a look at some of my work, you might enjoy "Hope." Take care now, and keep writing.
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Really nicely written. Great job here, I truly respect ur writing. great work, it flows well too. Nice work here, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me.
Thanks!
Snooboostoo chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Love the poem, my favorite line in this poem is, "I’m that last touch of reality
And the touch that drives you mad"