Reviews for Fallen
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Ronandchicken chapter 3 . 1/27/2004
Well, it's all right, I think the chapter was fine as it is.
Freedman chapter 3 . 1/26/2004
great chapter, although it could've been longer.
uhh... continue !
Ronandchicken chapter 2 . 1/25/2004
So it continues? Ok. That was certainly an interesting chapter.
Coma99 chapter 2 . 1/25/2004
This is so good! Keep going!
Seremela Minyatur chapter 2 . 1/24/2004
ok, so she didnt die. whats gonna happen now? update soon!
freedman121 chapter 2 . 1/24/2004
This sounds really good, but there seems to be something wrong with it to me... I just can't figure out what.
Oh well.
Coma99 chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Great! You have to keep going! It is so good!
Damaged chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
0_0 OOh, so intriguing! Are you going to write more? Please tell me you are! I absolutely love this! It's like, the PERFECT beginning for a story ... but, if you decide to not continue, it ended perfectly, leaving the reader totally shocked and absorbed into the piece (as all of your works). Keep up the great work!
Seremela Minyatur chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
its really good. but there is more right? is this gonna be like death penalty? even if it is, i dont really care.
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