That was beautifully written (ironic, eh?) I think everyone can relate to this piece, and this poem even says so! I love how the beginning talks about insecurities one right after another, and only the few lines at the end show that everyone is going through it. Fantastic job, you have a gift for writing!

I liked it! :-)

omg.. i have read this poem before.. and no it isn't de ja vous because i like quoted the last couple of lines before i got to the end.. the whole "catch their ugly" part.. it's so freaky.. and no i'm not psychic! haha.. i prolly stumbled onto your page before... but anyways.. i love it.. i'm gonna print it.. it's so just lik eme, except i can't catch anyone else's ugly.. i'm ugly enough on my own.. and everyone is like a million times prettier than me.. i'm just known as "the ugly one".. but anyway.. yeah.. good job.. and if you think you're ugly, TRUST ME, you look like 100x better than me, and i can say that even though i have no idea what you look like. so think of yourself as sexy! hahaha.. don't ask.. but good work.. byesies!

The ending was PERFECT! Wonderful job!

sad, but well done. )

Good repetition. Diction could be better, but regardless the topic stands true. Nice job.
-Cindy Moon *)

wow-so sad, but so in tune to what people feel sometimes-wow-u got such a great gift-never stop writing!

Wow. "I look and smile/And catch their ugly". What is UP with people writing these brilliant endings to their poems? Gosh. Lol. This is great. I love it.
*Clarie*

This poem has good content. I believe I commented on it in the second chapter of your story; you should look into over exaggerating desctription to get a more detailed view of "through your eyes", even if it has to be quite literally.
The poem is good overall, but, I do think that it could have used a little more of the description on "what would happen to all of these people if they caught 'the ugly'?". What happens to all of these people after their insecurities are let out?
On an ending note, the conclusion to this poem was wrapped up nicely.
You can never make a poem too long to get your point across. Then again this is comming from someone who writes huge/boring poems. Heh.
Keep writing! Blessings to you. :-)

Very good poem. I like the way this piece flows...having you being the imperfect one first and then shifting to another person. No one in this world is perfect..but everyone is special in someone's eyes.

Great Job. I really like this mainly because sometimes I put myself in that situation. Well keep up the good work. _