|Reviews for Floating Free, Floating Dead|
| drewhaaland chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Interesting image. A good beginning for an idea, but hardly worth its own poem. Expand it. Bring in details: create a situation, based in actuality or fiction. It takes hardly any effort at all to splooge one's angst on the page; it takes a great deal more skill to turn that angst into something worth reading.