Aw... stop putting yourself down! You ARE beautiful, no matter what anyone or yourself thinks.

Comment: Fabulous poem. I liked the way you ended each stanza with the line "I am not beautiful". Gives it this certain flow and emphasizes the message. Each stanza, I think, is written in an eloquent way and very much expresses the message. Anwyays, over-all, it's an A.

That's all. *hugs*

aw thats so sad! but realli profound and deep and moving! u rock at this poetry thing! u should publish a book by now! rock on!

aw,that's so amazing _ i loved it greatly! keep up the good work.
and honestly: thank you for supporting me on my poem, though i did remove it b/c 1- some of the reviews kinda hurt me and 2- i found allot of errors in the writing. but truly: thank you. it's nice to see another christian.
and once again, keep up the good work
the repeater:
-mKs

Beauty is only skin deep. Besides only a beautiful person could write something as beautiful as this. Excellent job! Keep up the wonderful work.
Needa S.

i understand the feeling behind this completely.
poiniant, touching, truthful.
i totally get this
you're a good writer.

I love it...self-concept is such and important aspect of the human condition. You captured that perfectly.

You really do have a way with words. Have you considered compiling your poems and getting published? I'm positive you'd have a shot. :D
P.S. I just updated the Shadows again, FYI.

You are beautiful. I've never seen you in my life, and I already know you are beautiful. How do I know this? I know this from how you represent yourself. It's not what's on the outside that makes one beautiful, but on the in.

Cool, cool, cool. Me like. Thank for the beautiful review! I know, I check up on those people often. And if there are any bad reviews I simply email them and boost their spirits! Lovely talking to you! *The Queen shakes your hand warmly then gives you a kiss on the cheek* Thank you! *Then she goes of to dance with the handsome King.*
QR

I know I'm gonna sound like a low-key sentimental wuss, but this is true:everyone's beautiful. Beauty is something inside you that makes you you. You just haven't found yours yet. Keep an open mind and you'll discover it soon.
-whatsa-