Reviews for Cold as Stone
Lhunuial chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
Nice poem, short but good. I like the sentence 'because it feels like home'.
axica chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
oo, gives me chills
beautiful, the rhythm rocks
the words are genuine originality, not the stuff found on Martha Stewart
Sammy- B chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
wow-thats awesome. Its simple and short, yet it says a lot!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Nice little poem, although a bit creepy. But I liked it anyway.
Morbane chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I find this a little cryptic; it could be interpreted several ways. The simplicity is carefully arranged and you end on a strong note. :) Interesting.
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Odd, but I like it..
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
You may want to change the first "stone" to another word. Maybe delete the second line entirely? OR It is cold / As chrome.
OR It is cold / As Nome.
I don't know.
OTHERWISE very intriguing!
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
interesting.. yeah. *TI*
teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
That definitely had that icy tone, beautifully written.