Reviews for 2x4
atreyu love chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
wow. interesting how he could see her after.
GhostHelwig chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Where do I begin? That was hot, and disturbing (only in a really good way!), and just absolutely cool. Are you planning on continuing it? I certainly hope so!
I love reading original fiction, and this was absolutely amazing. I haven't found many writers willing to tweak the typical Heaven and hell thing - kudos to you! My sister posted a poem on this site that kinda deals with religion - you can read it if you like. Her pen name is darthelwig and the poem is called Prophecy. It's only similar to this wonderful story in that I love them both!
I hope to read more of your work, because this was absolutely brilliant!
(Love the way he captures her soul. How come hell always entraps you by being more... 'pleasing'... than Heaven? Hardly seems fair, does it?)
Anyway, rock on!
Ticcies chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
Holy crap, that was AWESOME! I think I love Riley, LOL. I don't know why I always root for the bad guy...There needs to be more of this. I wanna know what happens with the guy! Arg! More Riley...m...
DeathsDragon chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
*snickers evilly*
I love it... really do!