| Reviews for Strange Bedfellows |
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   dreaminrealities chapter 1 . 1/25/2004 i love it! awesome story. I love the plot, everything! |
| crazylady4 chapter 7 . 1/24/2004 hello i love your story update soon please. |
| imgigi chapter 7 . 1/23/2004 good storyline! i love the story so far:) hurry up and update |
| fire-fem chapter 7 . 1/23/2004 Oh! I love this story! Secret relationships are the best! |
| Robecca chapter 5 . 1/23/2004 Thanks for the reviews you all. I know there are some mistakes, and I plan on fixing them - but I did fix the biggie. In Chapter 1, I pointed out that Nick had pale blue eyes, and then in Chapter 2 I mistaken put down that he had brown eyes...All fixed. Working on the next three chapters today, so enjoy! |
| Sarah P chapter 5 . 1/23/2004 This is an interesting story. I like the whole idea that they hate each other but they love each other as well. It's really good, well done. I have some critisism though. Your discription of Nick in inaccurate. It's in chapter 2. "Her eyes connected with Nick's pale blue eyes." but then you say in chapter 2 also, "Dark hair gelled perfectly into place, dark brown eyes." So is he supposed to have dark brown eyes or pale blue eyes? Hope it helps with your story. |
| fire-fem chapter 5 . 1/22/2004 This is very good! Please keep writing! |
| HotSmileC chapter 5 . 1/22/2004 Great Job with the story. Love The First Chappie. Created some kinda suspense. Can't wait for u to update |
| ariela chapter 5 . 1/22/2004 awsome story,great pasion and storyline,cant wait for the next chapter |