|Reviews for Adultry On Tozovac Four|
| Anna Mitchell chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
I enjoyed this. Especially the end. It isn't very spicy, but I still liked it.
Sorry not a very good review. :)
| Niamh chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Your story has great potential, but it is kind of bland. You could try developing your characters and their relationships with one another - create tension between Richard and his wife, a fight or something maybe. If they were happily married why did she go off with Bixby? Don't just say it was true love, that's boring.