Reviews for shards of my broken heart
Lellida chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
-_- so sad! I do enjoy the defiant anger part of it, when you say you will throw out the candle (unless it's your fire of life- then no!) but it's beautifully written.
JackKarson chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
I like the fact that though you dont have any good single images, you do have a very good overall image. You should try putting more into each word though rather than the poem.
Nadia20 chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
Great poem, I know exactly where you're coming from. :(