that was beautiful! thast exactly how ifeel about my boyfriedn! u r extremly talented and i dont think u shud ever stop writing poetry! much love and admiration to u!
u can check out my poems on my boyfriend if u want but id prefer u to check out my story: thats not how it happened.
tanx it wud mean loads and id love ur opinion!

Clever title! It made your poem that much more interesting. The ending is cute; you were right about that. You did a good job. Nice.