Reviews for Snow Day
twisted pheonix chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
this is the coolest short story i have ever read! your such a great writer! hope to see mroe soon! i also loved your poems! al of them. i think i left reviews a while ago, but im running late now, so this is a 'OMG ALL YOUR STUFF IS AMAZING' review all in one. hehe... but it is. and i love this story in particular!
Lady Patriot chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
That sounds a lot like a snowday around here! It's always a toss-up about what to do - stay inside and play Nintendo, or head for the local sledding hill.
Great job walking through the day. It can be difficult to keep a reader's interest with this kind of piece, but you did a good job capturing and holding my attention.
~Lady Patriot
Ryan Patrick Bailey chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Wow! What a great start to a seemingly great story! This is really nice. You have done an excellent job with applying imagery and diction into the context of the poem. Please keep up the good work and I'll continue to review your stuff. Take care!
Eternal Twilight chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Oh my god, that's amazing stuff you got there! O.O I liked how you had his thoughts go from negative to positive, and so on. Very deep and meaningful, with a good moral. Sometimes things do happen for a reason. You're absolutely right about that. And, about the 'those that don't have cocoa on a snowday are crazy' thing. -~ I'll be back to review more of your work. You now have me intregued. - Thanks for the review on Secret, by the way! -
Ilesha chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
I liked how things tied together. Some really fun desrcriptors. A little slow to start, though I'm glad that the hen was thanked for the eggs