I like this story although it was sad at the end. I personally think that you could have gone a bit more in description and write how Thalassa's love for Helenus grew...

Do I even have to say it:Epic!

Tht was interesting. The end was pretty sad though but I liked it.

That was fantastic. It's one of the best stories I've read on here (and I've been reading them for years now). I think it's my favorite of everything you've written-it even inched by your fantasy one I hold in such high esteem. Everything was nearly flawless-you could have expanded on some description, but that's about it. I found hints of Bradley in here, and I always like that. Thanks for a great story.

...wow.

This piece does nicely in interpreting the classic tale of Troy in a new way. While the reader knows that Troy is clearly to fall in the end, you delievered it in a way that kept the reader concerned the progession of events; how their consequences would hurt the characters.

Furthermore, you keep the reader wondering and hoping for the future of Thalassa. Does Thalassa escape with Astyanax? Does she and Helenus have a happy ending? Will Thalassa do all right without Troy and without the Amazons? This attachment to the character shows your masterful handling of plot development.

Your imagination carves an affecting story - one very worthy of being told alongside the original epic.

Finally you have made an Epilogue for the ending of Sun & Moon. Oh my God, I have been waiting for nearly a year! _ Thank you for completing the story! lol

I love the aspect you wrote from. This is amazing.

I finally finished reading this wonderful story! I am sad that it is over though...it was a complete masterpiece! I love greek mythology and everything about this story was extremly magnificent, I hope you are going to keep tht promise on writing an epilogue, I REALLY would like to read it!

Go Hector for letting her live! What a slut Helen is, I would MUCH rather be like Thalassa, even if she does kill people mercilessly.

OMG she killed him? I never thought she would do that, these amazons are harsh holy crap...

Very interesting and long story, I love long stories with a lot of deatails and this one had just that!

That was absolutely incredible!

WOW _

That was amazing. Sad, brilliant-and everything in between. There were just so many surprises and twists to the "main story" of Troy, if you know what I mean. But it was a cool twist-like Achilles being killed by the masked Apollo, then Paris by Oenone, and Briseus! You did really good with her! I would have liked to haveseen more with Helenus, to show their love, but hey-this was war! Lol..kind of This story was just SO detailed and wonderful...I though that maybe Thalassa would get out with Astynax (is that how you spell it? prolly not), but he got thrown over the wall becuase Andromach broke the act.

Wow.

This was a really well written story of Troy, good concept, because most people can't sucessfully create their own characters into a well-known tale. But you pulled it off. Cookies to you, and I look foreward to other such works of yours!

And if you're interested in any Atlantis stories, I've got one started, called "The City in the Sea."

Cheers!

wow...this stuff is getting good. I think it's amazing how you worked your own fiction into the stories of Troy instead of writing about the already existing characters-not that that's bad, because I've read a lot of good ones like that. But you've really pulled off a unique thing here. Cookies, Roses, and whatever else to you!

*~*Cheers!*~*

Well...isn't that lovely...

At least she killed Daos..he deserved it. I think I'll point out that this story ... rocks. Lol...ok...I'll shut up an dkeep reading...