AMAZING poem...I loved the whole comparison and it was written beautifully. It also had a nice rhythm. This one's going right to favorites :) Fantastic job!
~Lsay312

OOh. Nice. Well-done! It's beautiful. The rhyming, the comparison, perfect. And it's so in touch with reality.

the rhyming is good, the topic is very good. i can definetly relate to this. :) keep it up