Reviews for My Fairy Tale
Clodhopper chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
okay - our favorite stanza was the last, we thought that was the greatest. I (Mack) liked the second line and I (Ty) liked the last two. The whole thing was really creative and i (Mack) liked how you wrote it was a bitter hell. also how you wrote that you "put up a good fight". way to be. isnt that sad that "happily ever after" doesnt really come without work? shame. anyway, we both enjoyed it, very creative.
~Mack and Ty
Danica chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
This is a REALLY good poem, so congrats for writing it! I wish I could write as well as you, but I cant so to bad for me... Anyway Im off to go look at your other stuff... Congrats, again! I know that I wont be dissapointed with your other work... Ta-ta for now!
arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Wow. This is amazing. You take almost a humorous air to the entire poem, so the reality and the sorrow doesn't hit you until you think about it. Beautiful lines, and great idea. Keep up the good work!
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
Honestly, this is one of the best poems I have ever read. It absolutely loved it anc could totally identify with it. The rhyming worked well it had a good rhythm. I especially liked the last stanza, tied everything together nicely. This one's going right to favorites. Keep up the GREAT work!
~Lsay312