Reviews for My Fairy Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay - our favorite stanza was the last, we thought that was the greatest. I (Mack) liked the second line and I (Ty) liked the last two. The whole thing was really creative and i (Mack) liked how you wrote it was a bitter hell. also how you wrote that you "put up a good fight". way to be. isnt that sad that "happily ever after" doesnt really come without work? shame. anyway, we both enjoyed it, very creative. ~Mack and Ty |
![]() ![]() This is a REALLY good poem, so congrats for writing it! I wish I could write as well as you, but I cant so to bad for me... Anyway Im off to go look at your other stuff... Congrats, again! I know that I wont be dissapointed with your other work... Ta-ta for now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is amazing. You take almost a humorous air to the entire poem, so the reality and the sorrow doesn't hit you until you think about it. Beautiful lines, and great idea. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, this is one of the best poems I have ever read. It absolutely loved it anc could totally identify with it. The rhyming worked well it had a good rhythm. I especially liked the last stanza, tied everything together nicely. This one's going right to favorites. Keep up the GREAT work! ~Lsay312 |