Reviews for A Deep Breathe
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
heh! sorry its probably not meant to be funny, i just get a kick out of it :S sorry!
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Hello Shaz-
Ahh a horror haiku, just my genre. Very good indeed.
Whispers In Silence
shinco chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
That scared me a little bit! Great detail! GO SHAZAAM!
Non-existent Puritanism chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Ahh nice Haiku...I've been having trouble explaining what type oif feelings poems have today, so bear with was..umm angsty..powerful...good!
Lauren K chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Good. Lil anal note-it should be "A Deep Breath," not breathe. I'd rephrase the very last line, but otherwise-good. I like "Emptiness fades into night"
Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I see what you mean by being scared. Thanks for reviewing my stuff.
Hail the Warrior
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Very well-written haiku. I can definitely relate to this feeling. It haunted me many a time. Shudder. Keep writing :)
teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Very descriptive, I can almost feel your fears.
nutcase chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
wow, interesting. but i know the feeling, nice capturing. Joey
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
o great description of fear.. i like it alot
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
lol.. are you scared? poor you. this is actually really awesome. very emotional i think. well.. yeah. well done. *TI*