Awesome, Awesome story! I loved it. I can't wait to starting reading the sequel!

As far as I'm concerned that was a crappy ending. I sure hope there's a sequel. You left us all hanging! D Not fair! Excellent story though. I really enjoyed reading it!

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It has been absolutely forever since I've been back here. But I've found the last two chapters, at last, and have come to . Wasn't expecting an ending this soon is I guess what I mean. You addressed the abrupt feeling with the comment that there had to be a sequel. Really, I think it feels more like a series. With sequels, the first plot is well and truly wrapped up, whereas you've just introduced a whole lot of plot lines that are hanging in the air. The magic training, the newly opened line of communication with Mia, Will's plot to kill Cheyenne, Austin's bastardy, Chris's thing for Chey, etc. Feels far from over.I'll look around, and see if I've missed any further developments.

I love you. Will you marry me so we can become famous novelists together.

This is one of my favorite story I ever read on fictionpress job well down, I hope you are very pride of yourself. I don't even know you but I'm pride for you this needs to be on a bookselve and the store. I hope you consider getting this publish. job well done, job well done! can you check out some of my work if you don't mind

WOW! That was a brilliant start to your story, and I am definately reading more.

::Curls up in to a ball and begins crying:: No! It can't be over! We love it immensely and are glade it will have a sequel. Hurry! 52 chapters is alot, wow. Well done, you're a great author! My foot's !

I seriously suggest you go and get this story published. Its one of the best ones I've ever read. Hurry up and get the sequel out!

SugarCat: I like this story!, it's cool!

hey! nice work as always. The poignant feeling in this chapter was great, along with the repetition of 'only time could tell' at the end. *slaps self* what am I doing, deconstructing your story? well now the time has come for us devoted fans to get down on our PLEASE PLEASE hurry and post up something from the sequel! And PLEASE put in some more romance- hopefully with jon and chey? *puppy eyes*Waiting for the rest,Carmen

Awesome. Totally awesome. Didn't catch grammar errors (that I remember, at least), and discription was AWESOME.

Okay, so I'm not Cheyenne, but I personally like the spectulation and metaphors at the end.

This REQUIRES a sequil! Evil writer's block! Post it soon, and qood luck with it!

Cheers!

You can't end it there! YOu need to write about how she gets the throne! Put up the sequel soon!

nevermind the earlier note. i didnt see this chapter

very nice. i like the flowing ending. this chap did have some mistakes, so reading it over would be good, but it is a nice little stopping spot. good luck with that writers block, and i hope the next story thingy comes out soon.

is it over? it can't end like that. it leaves to many open questions!