|Reviews for the mechanics of a touch|
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
love this piece! esp. your last line.
| Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Interesting and refreshing. It's good to see thought provoking poems on this site. You could have easily turned this into a romance poem - which is typical, but you stopped exactly where you should have.
Thanks for posting.