Reviews for Giving In
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Hello-
Wow- Such a great haiku. Something this good means you have some raw talent. I enjoyed this piece.
Eulogy of the Scorned chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
*Lights a lighter*...Yes.
Devil6667 chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
I like it. It's very powerful. R/r some of mine too. Rock on.
Incrys chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Short, maybe not sweet, but definitely to the point! Good work )
Priestess of Aiyoku chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
thanks for commenting on my poem, ive just been abit down lately.
karmakaze chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I completely agree:(
shinco chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Very good, this is like a Haiku isn't it? Well I liked it bunches!... no! LOVED it bunches! Yay! He, he! _ Nice one!
TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
even though this was a short poem i still thought it was kool...i liked the choice of words you used...very professional...
WhiteRequiem chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
"Longing sense of freedom breathes/ Silent surrender." Well, I can certainly relate to that one...
Wow. This haiku gave me the shivers.
Nicely done.
Nasifah chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Nice! I can totally relate.
VolleyBCutiePie chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Great job! I like how you said 'longing sense of freedom breathes'. Very powerful. Keep up the great work!
Rachel
P.S. Could you please R and R one of my poems or stories? Thanx!
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
A great way of describing that feeling of "giving in". A well-written haiku. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
*Longing sense of freedom breathes*
Write more! This is a great haiku!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Well that sux, not the haiku but what you are talking about, but I guess you do what you do, Um, I think I go now!