|Reviews for Sea of Stars|
| tiff chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Hm... a sea of stars. Paradise in the making. To savor their cool caresses, to hark their tinkling laughs, to relish their rays of milky light... Paradise in the making.
PS: You know what else you could do? You could KISS a star.
| MeeLee chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Wow, even better than the "Fighting" one. You amaze me! o_0
| fayreweill chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
beautiful piece of work, marvellously written!
| silverdream139 chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
Wai! This is such an awesome idea...a sea of stars! Wowowowowow...originality extreme! And *such* a good rhythm...and the rhymes are wonderful...I love your style. XD I swear...even if I tried, I could never write like...*this*. *sigh* Ah, well. Then I'll just have to worship your great poetic-ness. *bows deeply*
P.S. ...I can't get that out of my head now...'sea of stars'...gah..x.X...now I want to draw it...
| Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
What a dangerously sexy poem.
I love the images I get when I read this; makes me feel all fuzzy and fluffy inside.
-Cindy Moon *)
| Summerdazed chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
wonderful imagery! I love stars! You are very talented and creative! Keep writing!
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Great poem. This was well-written, flowed well and had some beautiful imagery. The last stanza was my favourite. Keep writing :)