Reviews for My World
Illigitimate Luv Child chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
You're absolutely right, my flame was uncalled for and I would like to publicly apologise to you for it. You are a talented writer and I had no right to write that about your poem. On a happier note, this poem was beautiful, 'with wind to a charred sky' that line really grabbed me.

Deeply Apologetically,

Illigitimate Luv Child
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
i love it! :D
Helxine chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Short and sweet. Nice choice of words.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
this is great. i can't really say why i like it but i do and it's great.
Seaspray chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Great poem! I loved the bit about the ocean drowning the stars... very well written, well done!
Magnificent Moi chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Good descriptive writing. I don't feel as much emotion.
Lines To Time chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
So when are you going to get something published? Because, you know, you would be a best-seller within twenty minutes. Plus, I just finished my new book and now I need another.
esotericblood chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Awesome poem, you seem talented. I love the metaphors and the imagery of this poem. I'm also a big fan of Daniel Johns, hehe, if you care.