Reviews for The Demon's Side of the Story |
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![]() ![]() What the heck is a lemon? |
![]() ![]() That happened way too fast. Real life relationships don't, or at least shouldn't, work that way. Spelling errors included in here. Fix them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Lemon XD That's right...I come back to review the Lemon...I gotta put a lemon in LotS... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, it's soo sweet...an up date would be nice - |
![]() ![]() ![]() good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's such a sweet story! An update would make me happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice! now it's much better! congrats! *conffeti!* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! It's me! Cute story of your I like it! Would you read my one story and see how it is? Laters! *Winks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should really do the lemon! (you were doing great! really trust me!) and of course it duits the story for god sakes! well i'm happy you finnaly posted! XD hope to see more! as always ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story, but you might need to make demon more evil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of odd... But it's all good... Say, is the rating planning to go up anytime soon? Just wondering. |
![]() ![]() Okay, that's what I figured, but I just wanted to make sure. -_-; I like this, but the poor demon! That sounds like my story, only not. oo; well, the Demon's past, that is. Hehe... Dust... you know, I wouldn't doubt that he's aslo savoring the Angels saliva as well, as bad as it sounds, it's most probable. ;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this just seems it's gonna be great! please update more! i like the rythm of things , this is a kind of yaoi thing right? male-male? |
![]() ![]() omg, j'adore! I love it! keep it up! WOW! ok so, enough with the exclamation points. It's awesome. I trust that you'll explain some of the background soon :), until then it rocks! |
![]() ![]() _;; don't take this the wrong way, but is that a guy or a girl? he/she seems like a guy, because of the wording and the way he is aware that his body is smooth, most girls like to think them not, so i'm guessing a guy! eitherway, i like it! _; continue! |