|Reviews for Shine|
| Anja de Lange chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Yes, touching and pretty harsh. It's not always that easy but it's a good thing to strive towards.
Seize the moment, hey?
One of your best so far, I'd say...
| mercury-phoenix chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
I quite like this...think I'll add it to favorite stories
| HideAwayFairy chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
Beautiful. I really needed this poem right now to remind me of things I had forgotten. This poem really cheered me up. Keep writing, this is going on my favs.
| BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
"Soft stillness and the night
Become touches of sweet harmony..."
The message in this one is similar as the one of my latest work, using even same words to get the feelings out!
I understand this one clearly...
| Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
Nicely done, I would remove the 'and' on the sharp as a razor lines, I think it reads better with the and removed.
| Roxbury88 chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
great job! hope to read more. -if you have the time, please r/r mine