great plot ! spelling and grammer are good too.. although ur story could be better if it was more descriptive and went into more detail about the characters so we get to know them better. keep writing and update soon!

*claps* Bravo! Great job!

oh wow! nice story! but da ending's a bit sudden... but all gud newayz

I did think the ending was good, but I want a sort of sequel... you know how Link said he wanted to write after acting, and how Crystal was studying to be a pediatrician? Why not write a story about that time?

Heehee. Just an idea.

I really liked this story, well done.

please make a sequel! its so cute!

Cute story. Good job. But your ending it there? Continue!

Nice story developing here. I like the characters' personalities so far.

Story line has potential. But extremely bad character and story developement.

Too many holes in the story and unbased claims:1. Cow brain.2. What type of complication could cause such death? In today's medical advanced age - such situations are rare.

In both these intances - a simple google seach would have yielded the bit of information needed to make your story credible.

A waste of a potentially interesting story line.

that was good.

ah i heart it i heart it!

fantastic...only think it should have lasted for longer!

wow! i cant believe its over its an amazing story!

""I want you to tell me exactly what in the hell your problem is and I want to here it now.""

Dude, your wife, aka her best friend, has just died, OF COURSE SHE'S GOT A BLOODY PROBLEM!

;.;

;_; *Cries*