Reviews for Crash
M L chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
I've never understood the point of haikus. I guess I like them, but I don't go out and say 'hey, I feel like some haikus today' Anyways. I don't write them or read them, but I like the way you crushed so much into.. a haiku. good job.
Crimson Riley chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Love this!
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
Hello-
Well dang, you got a knack for good haikus.
amdespot chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
really good for a first haiku. haikus are hard, you have to get meaning and depth into 3 short lines and certain syllables. this was great, it really captured a great depth!
Morde Tempest chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
For your first I am impressed! Keep writing them!
WhiteRequiem chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
I like this one. It has quite the powerful image, and the added ryhme I believe makes this all the more impacting.
"Heart and mind collide" is an excellent line.
-Grant19-
Dewi chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Masterful. Love it.
WannaBePoet chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I like this, short, sweet, and to the point -_-
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I like it, but if few survive then there wouldn't be anybody!
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Aw. This sound likes... a heartbreak poem? That's cute if it is. As an authoress, I love feedback too. _ Please review my haikus too! _