Reviews for Crash |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've never understood the point of haikus. I guess I like them, but I don't go out and say 'hey, I feel like some haikus today' Anyways. I don't write them or read them, but I like the way you crushed so much into.. a haiku. good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello- Well dang, you got a knack for good haikus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good for a first haiku. haikus are hard, you have to get meaning and depth into 3 short lines and certain syllables. this was great, it really captured a great depth! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For your first I am impressed! Keep writing them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one. It has quite the powerful image, and the added ryhme I believe makes this all the more impacting. "Heart and mind collide" is an excellent line. -Grant19- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Masterful. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, short, sweet, and to the point -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, but if few survive then there wouldn't be anybody! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. This sound likes... a heartbreak poem? That's cute if it is. As an authoress, I love feedback too. _ Please review my haikus too! _ |