pretty good. I didn't get bored once!

e!*deep breath*e!*very big deep breath*eeee!*breathing very hard*that...was so...just...it was...yay!*collapses*

Great story Update soon!

coolness! and sexy!

I love this story – I’m completely hooked to be honest. All the characters in it seem to fit really well. I love the way you’ve given them their own identities and pasts too. It makes it that much more real and believable. Also, the combination of dialogue and description is incredible; it gives such a natural flow to the writing. I know you must've heard this before, but Si and Emory’s relationship is probably my favourite - something just appeals to me about them, although I’m not sure if I want them to get together and lose all that tension you’ve built up - though it’s closely followed by Adrian and Max’s. But I can’t help wondering what’s going to happen to them (especially Noah) if Loki does end up having to leave. Hmm… well, can’t wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

I LOVE this story, tis sweet. Update soon!

so good. i actually got to read this story cuz my sister recommended it to me... im really glad because although - like you said- all romance is cliché some clichés are to die for... even more so when treated by an author that knows what he/she s doin. i dunno. but this is just delicious. delicious story... delicious characters... i love it all... all the couples(tho with a preferance for si and kitty who have yet to become a couple... yay for angst!) aw... im rahter displeased to find out that you havent updated in a while... you know there should be laws against making poor faithful readers suffer. just update often(just a few chapters a week- one for each day?) and i shall be happy-happy! no but seriously the angst, the tension, the intensity... its awesome... and very very HOT!so the general message of this rther pointless review is: UPDATE!:P

please please please hurry and update! Ive GOT to know wat happens with emory and si! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

i like it i love it i want some more of it! update soon

Ah, wow, it feels like I haven't bee on here in forever and a day. But at any rate, it's good to catch up on this fic now that I've got some summer-time on my hands.

For a quick transition chapter, I quite liked it. Adrian and Max are sweet together. As are Adrian and Noah, actually, but in a different way. As always, I love the way you do description. It just has this way of being kind of minimalist, but at the same time showing you exactly what's going on. It moves things along nicely, but is still vivid and realistic.

Also, I loved Adrian and Noah's phone conversation; it just struck me as absolutely the way that best friends talk. I especially liked the line about knowing that Noah only takes certain kinds of sympathies. It seems a small thing, but it just made me identify with them that much more.

The song at the end was also particularly good; I like "Bonding time with the pixilated screen."

I accept your explanation for Si's name. I kind of live in conservative suburbia, so I don't really encounter than kind of thing often, but I do know what you mean. Nah, now the naming that seems particularly striking is Dorian. I wonder how he'll end up in relation to other certain Dorians in famous bits of literature...

Anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter, and I’m looking forward to your next update!

Good night, good luck, win awards,SLH

I am infatuated with this story! Please update! I must find out what happens with Emory and Sy and Loki can't go home!.. I am desperate

well, I never imagined emory as the type to dress like a girl, but hey. whatever floats your boat. so... perhaps sianyde meets with emory? that would be fate. for sure. that tatoo the band gets sounds very creepy. but then again all tatoos sound creepy to me because I'm afraid of needles. go figure. when I read this story, I always picture anime and stuff. like reading a manga book. this should be made into one. :) it's very good.

love the song. it should really be made into one. most definately. a date! a date! oh yay for dates! i get excited to easily. stupid sianyde is such a stupid flirt. gr. they better get together. and adrian better talk to that guy. too bad he's not straight, I'd take him for myself. hehe.

poor emory. I sure know the feeling. :( I love the name sianyde. but he sounds a bit scary looking. lol. that creep hitting on Loki like that. thank goodness for Noah coming to the rescue. hehe. and that was sweet that loki kissed his cheek. and of course, I love adrian. :) and you're poems are really good. I assume you write them?

this story is brilliant so far. I love Adrian. he sounds wonderful. and Loki sounds hot. as well as Noah. phew. and I love music, so this just adds to the wonderfulness of the story. plus slash. so, ya know. this is going to rock. I can tell. and I love all the names. they are awesome too. :)